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    Inactive Member Big Fucking Deal's Avatar
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    So sorry you don't like the way I look.
    I never said my face was nice
    Never said my waist was small.
    So it's not my fault you presumed they were.
    I'm not the perfection you expected me to be
    But I won't apologize for myself
    Because I am what I am.

    Deal with it.

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    ouch frown

    that sucks........looks are so secondary, i wish people could realize that

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    I like everything except the last line. Just strikes me as bitter overkill for some reason. The first part of the poem does just fine on its own.

    take care

    ---jones

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    I really didn't think that the poem was trying to make looks out to be first-ondary. I just thought it was straight-forward and saying shut-up.

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    Jeze... sweetie, you look great, and NEVER let anyone else tell you different biggrin

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    wow.


    it always sucks when two months later you realize that the person you wanted to see something the most did see it.


    funny how shit can change in two months, eh?

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